To my shame, a small part of me did contemplating running off. However, as I looked at the scared seventeen year old, something stirred within me. Call it maternal. Call it compassion. Call it stupidity. Whatever it was, I was staying where I was.
I've just finished the first draft of Book 2 in the series so I may post some sentences from that story next week.
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Oooh, great six! I'm very intrigued... :D
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing. What a great tease!
ReplyDeleteGreat show of the protective instinct! :)
ReplyDeleteI really like Quality :)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this. Like the internal conflict.
ReplyDeleteLove her determination, great six!
ReplyDeleteI liked her voice and decision process.
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing how much heroism can look like stupidity from certain angles . . . XD Great six!
ReplyDeleteOh, powerful six. I love how sometimes other people's needs can make a person braver. You show that beautifully here. ^_^
ReplyDeleteglad to see you and intriguing snippet. Is it me or is the tense off in the first sentence?
ReplyDeleteAn instantly likable character in less than six sentences. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteGlad to see yoiu back! And with such an intriguing character. Great job of making want to know more!
ReplyDeleteI like the inner conflict here. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWelcome back to SSS. :-)
Hey welcome back, Gayle! Can't wait to read the snippets from Book 2.
ReplyDeleteGlad to see you back. :) I love this look into Quality's thoughts. We've all had that conflict of feeling and thoughts, the quick devolution of those thoughts and then the choice to go ahead and do something, even if it's stupid. Great six.
ReplyDeleteWelcome back, missed you! Great peek into Quality's thoughts here!
ReplyDeleteLike the maternal feelings. Welcome back.
ReplyDeleteGood to see you back, Gayle. I don't know if you want to know about typos, but in the first line "contemplating" probably should be "contemplate". :) Good six.
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