It's been so long since I thought of the blue planet as home that I do see myself as alien. I suppose most humans don't have their own ship that can travel in time and space, and can fit in their back pocket! But that's a story for another day. All I'm going to say now is that the previous owner was incredibly drunk and dying. He stated quite clearly that the ship was now mine and threw the keys at me. Well, more like they fell out of his hand before he let out an almighty fart and died.
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Love this six and the characters voice! :D
ReplyDeleteLol - what a way to go!
ReplyDeleteI'm going to echo Jessica's comment. You have nailed the voices. Well done.
ReplyDeleteOh too funny! Great visuals!
ReplyDeleteFits into his back pocket!? WAY cool! :-D
ReplyDeleteGreat six! I'm hooked and want to know more!
ReplyDeleteOh Gayle, your sixes never fail to make me spurt Coke with laughter! Loved the last line!
ReplyDeleteOMG, I freaking love it! Are these the opening lines? I'd buy it... Loved the voice! Let me know if this is a time-travel too, so I can link to it from mine....
ReplyDeleteThis is hysterical! I love it. Creative! :-) Tell me more! Especially about the ship in the back pocket!
ReplyDeleteLMAO! Great voice!
ReplyDeleteWhatever's going on, I know it's going to be a wild ride! Great six!
ReplyDeleteWell, a lot is going on in this story, that's for sure! Comical aliens... refreshing!
ReplyDeleteHilarious! I'll be coming back for more.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fabulous way to end it! Total LOL moment. ;c)
ReplyDeleteOMG loved the fart - and wish I had one of those gadgets - well done! of course I'll be back
ReplyDeleteYour sound effects are, as usual, fantastic! XD
ReplyDeleteWell done. Why is it at the mention of a mere fart, giggles come? I'll be back.
ReplyDeleteROFL! You have such a way with comedic writing; something I envy. This made me think of The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy. Wonderful six.
ReplyDeleteDon't know what the story's about yet but you hooked me for sure with the almighty fart! LOL
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Drunk, or appearing drunk? If the original owner was not human, maybe he was just reacting to something in the environment.
ReplyDeleteFinders keepers. Great way to get a new ride. Intriguing and funny six.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Gem. Great way to get a new ride. I want one. Fun six, Gayle. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome humorous six!
ReplyDeleteFunny and well written snippet!
ReplyDeleteLmao! I'd take it. :)
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